Friday, May 20, 2011

Final Writing Project

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With everything coming to an end mean it time for final grades. That should be base on the work do this semester. From the 3Ps to the Boggs and all the writing. With reviewing all of this I have made a decision that I deserve an A because of all the work and improvement I have done this semester.

You may believe that I deserve a lower grade. You might say it because of participation and progress. For not sharing and only doing the basic work. But there is so much more that I am better at.

Everything that I learned has become a habit in my work. From my blogs, to reading, to analyzing, and my writing. The book I read was very inserting mostly because they where Steve King book one of my favorite author. When doing the work for them I liked getting the pictures to help explain what the book about. I wrote about 5 poem and added pictures and color to the words. So it can help understand what I wrote about. On my blog everything is posted that also includes the persuasive essay which is written in the right format.

Everything that is learned, there will be improvement on it. For this semester I improve on a lot of thing. One example is writing poems. This time last year I could not write one at all. Iambic Pentameter made no since. But now it can not be easier.  It just likes taking a stroll in the park. Before I came to this class I have never done a blog before. My first one was very pain and boring. But as time want on I learn new technique to make them more interesting. Like how I put pictures or add color to the words. And also how to write good comments on them.

I hope this make you see that the grade I deserve is an A for doing all my work and all my improvements I have done. That includes the blogs, the poems, the essay, and analysis.

Friday, May 13, 2011

villanelle

In everyone life there is one main goal
Sometimes it is big other time it's small
To follow ones dream to fill ones role

For it will be like climeing up a pole
Even though you don't want to you will fall
In everyone life there is one main goal

Life will seems like it is a small stroll
And it will feel like you are being stall
To follow ones dream to fill one role

Some people will attack you like a mole
In your way there will always be a wall
In everyone life there is one main goal

Even if you will fall into a deep hole
You will get there even if you have to crawl
To follow ones dream to fill ones role

Once you reach it you will feel that you are whole
You will feel like you can have it all
In everyone life there is one main goal
To follow ones dream to fill ones role

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Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Sonnets

My little tortoise oh how I love tee

From your green color to your name Road Kill      

How you ran around slowly going wee

Or just being you and standing still                              



Oh how your color mixes with the ground

I wish you won’t dig under the fence

So I won’t have to go to the pound

When I don’t see you I get very tense



Oh how I would miss you if you where gone

It would be sad if your are not on the rock

Which I love to see you on when it is dawn

That is always right by the little clock



I can’t believe what you had to go trough

When you almost become turtle stew