Final Writing Project

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With everything coming to an end mean it time for final grades. That should be base on the work do this semester. From the 3Ps to the Boggs and all the writing. With reviewing all of this I have made a decision that I deserve an A because of all the work and improvement I have done this semester.

You may believe that I deserve a lower grade. You might say it because of participation and progress. For not sharing and only doing the basic work. But there is so much more that I am better at.

Everything that I learned has become a habit in my work. From my blogs, to reading, to analyzing, and my writing. The book I read was very inserting mostly because they where Steve King book one of my favorite author. When doing the work for them I liked getting the pictures to help explain what the book about. I wrote about 5 poem and added pictures and color to the words. So it can help understand what I wrote about. On my blog everything is posted that also includes the persuasive essay which is written in the right format.

Everything that is learned, there will be improvement on it. For this semester I improve on a lot of thing. One example is writing poems. This time last year I could not write one at all. Iambic Pentameter made no since. But now it can not be easier.  It just likes taking a stroll in the park. Before I came to this class I have never done a blog before. My first one was very pain and boring. But as time want on I learn new technique to make them more interesting. Like how I put pictures or add color to the words. And also how to write good comments on them.

I hope this make you see that the grade I deserve is an A for doing all my work and all my improvements I have done. That includes the blogs, the poems, the essay, and analysis.

villanelle

In everyone life there is one main goal
Sometimes it is big other time it's small
To follow ones dream to fill ones role

For it will be like climeing up a pole
Even though you don't want to you will fall
In everyone life there is one main goal

Life will seems like it is a small stroll
And it will feel like you are being stall
To follow ones dream to fill one role

Some people will attack you like a mole
In your way there will always be a wall
In everyone life there is one main goal

Even if you will fall into a deep hole
You will get there even if you have to crawl
To follow ones dream to fill ones role

Once you reach it you will feel that you are whole
You will feel like you can have it all
In everyone life there is one main goal
To follow ones dream to fill ones role

Photostory

Sonnets

My little tortoise oh how I love tee

From your green color to your name Road Kill      

How you ran around slowly going wee

Or just being you and standing still                              

Oh how your color mixes with the ground

I wish you won’t dig under the fence

So I won’t have to go to the pound

When I don’t see you I get very tense

Oh how I would miss you if you where gone

It would be sad if your are not on the rock

Which I love to see you on when it is dawn

That is always right by the little clock

I can’t believe what you had to go trough

When you almost become turtle stew  

 

Outside Reading Book

Desperation

The central issue is that in the small town call Desperation there is a cop that lost his mind. He killed everyone in the town. And now is get people off the highway next to the town. He is putting them in jail. Then he kill them. When he done hung the up on a wall he go get more people. the people he has right now or try to escape.

I wonder who is going to be killed next. Will it  be one of the people in the jail.

I don't think it is the boy name David Carver the cop seem to like him. Or will it be the people who are trying to find that author Johnny Marinville who they work for. Or will the cop get more people off the high way. With the way thing are going it can be anyone. The cop seem capably of killing everyone he can get his hand on. He already kill a little girl.



  I'd like to know why and how did the cop get the way he is. All i know about him
   His name is Collier Entragian use to be a miner but he lost his job the town need deputies so they hired him. He also not married and is on workman's comp. And he change same how no one really he just not the same. I wont to knew did he just snap or did something happen to him .


Although it seems that the cop is going to kill them i think they can get away. The bar were not mad small enough to hold a kid. When the cop not there David, the kid, need to slip out go look for a pair of keys and let everyone else. then when there all out go look for guns which should not be hard there in the they are in a small town jail. They also need to try to find car key for one of the random car in the street. And have to avoid the cop and the coyotes at all cost.

There is consequence of  escaping is there a small change that it might work.the reason are if the cop catch them he will so no mercy while  kill them. There hungery coyotes are everwhere and the will attack them for food. And the next town is really far a way they need to find a way and supplies to get there or they will die in the desert.There is a bad sand storm they can get lost in.  Even though it a small chance of  survival they should take it becouse if they stay they will be killed.

Concrete Poem

Riddle Poem

I stare at the sky,                    

My feet in the Ground.                                   

I sing to the heart,                                                               

Without making a sound.

                  

                             

My touch can be painful,

Or soft as a feather.

I love the rain,

But need sunny weather.

                                  

I come dressed in colors,

By myself or with friends.

To show someone love,

Which someone else sends

                    

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